Scrivener of the Gods

There's only the fight with the beasts to free Vel. Actual gladiator fights werent programmed in. Those show up in AV2. I haven't noticed the problem woth the hermit.

Banned for laughing at work from reading this chat.

Banned because you must have been before my time.

Chapter 12: Jenkles As Spook, Rhen, and Nox squelched through the waterways, they noticed something. The slime was moving. More than one time it tried to envelop them, before being popped by Rhen's blade. After what seemed like hours they emerged from the sludge. It oosed down the hatch in pursuit, but quickly gave up the chase. The trio looked onward, and Spook was spooked (yeehaw!). All around them, meandering about, were vampires, and what looked to be ghosts. The ghosts simply passed through and by the spy, sword singer, and necromancer, dodging the cold iron and chilling the trio to the bone. The vampires stalked them, but with a wave of her hand, Nox put them in a state of docility. After an eternity to the spy and singer, they walked under an archway leading into a large cavern. Seeing a figure standing at the end of a walkway, they cautiously stepped toward it. Then it turned, revealing that it was a clown. Spook was spooked (hehe). After an argument about Spook's name not being Georgie, but him knowing a Georgie, the clown challenged the trio to a game of riddles to the death. Somehow the spy, singer, and necromancer won. The clown gave them a stone, explaining the history of Agea, then complained that he hadn't eaten a child in ages. He left Spook spooked.

Welcome back and HOLY CRAP you're talented!

If the hair colour did mix in Aian geneology, and Rhen where Talia's kid (which woild be awkward to explain to Dameon) Rhen would look more like this.

I always considered the fact that Alicia's mom had the same hair colour as Rhen. Used to do Punnett Squares for that kind of thing. If Devin's parents are who I think they are and blue, violet, and blonde are recessive in that world then Rhen's hair colour checks out. I'll upload a picture of one of those Punnetts later if I remember to.

Devin is 3 years older than Talia, so they should probably wait a few years, although in that type of society that was the norm. Honestly I'd more likely ship Alicia with Jack because of AV2.

Thanks, although I there is one that the bottom is above the player. Shoild be the lowest one under Genna's house. Only noticed it because the kid ran through it. It's not major though.

So I figured I might as well critique just in case there are some minor things you miss when finishing to rest. It is just the demo though. Butterflies are on the same layer as the player, and therefore cannot be moved past. Bookshelves so far don't have content. A single tree in lower Elden can be walked through. I'll more than likely be back.

I remember one time when @moonpeace realized that I was Father of Aia on YouTube. I just got my first subscriber and told my friend I'd make a video. Lol.

August 4th. Added ~Argoyle

I'm wanting to say Bjorne Lynne abut that can't be it. Enchanted/Yewtree/Unicorn is the title theme. Then there's trollenchanted which is my favorite track.

Welcome.

I've been meaning to update this, but school has been really taxing.