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  1. Sometimes one has to trust the people to do the right thing. Here, in the piracy thing, the same has to be done. Trust the people
  2. I love the latest screenshots, they're awesome
  3. Not sure if serious On the topic though, I think it's a horrible bill. Information is free, no one has bought it. I don't have to go to Einstein and Newton and pay them for the knowledge. For this reason, the knowledge part of this bill which relates to Wikipedia is ridiculous. The Artist part, I agree with slightly. It is the artist's right to get money. Even YT videos, the artists are paid per view by YT. So the artists lose money if someone watches it on unofficial copies
  4. What KTC said. You either have genes for pale or dark skin or in between. You can get paler and darker but not too pale or too dark P.S- Indians are not BLACK
  5. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    Teaches Magic, Sword fighting and healing. I think Yannes was being sarcastic. Oh and I removed the blue building, the big one at the back and made a sort of practice yard
  6. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    Yes, it is. And the blue building to the top is the training arena of the same school. Thanks for the advice, I'll be adding some stuff to the blue buildings P.S-Anyone got a good name for the school? Collegium of War and Magic sounds like I've ripped it off from Aveyond.
  7. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    I've changed the name of the game. I like the new one better. Anyways, here's the entire city of Gibratania. This is the main city of the whole game since our school is her. Oh and it's also the city that was supposed to resemble Thais from AP but I couldn't do it very well. So here: Oh and I want people to identify the school!
  8. Definitely not a crow. I can say from personal experience of crow attacks
  9. Well, about the map. (Oh man, I've heard Yannes say the same thing to me so many times) Anyways, the town square (Clock area) looks perfect. And it will look lively to once you add people and the barrels Yannes said As for the garden, it looks awesome, again. Maybe you could add a rabbit or two. And a bird, no city is complete without a bird Also, maybe you should use the Inn signs (Suggestion) And now for teh compliments. OMG! That statue and orb area looks so pretty xD And the umbrella-d tables
  10. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    I've added a few things in Status and removed a few. (Remind me never to go editing scripts again and search google first) Anyways, I'm using this window skin. It looks lovely despite being simple http://www.kobrasrealm.net/viewrs.php?164
  11. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    Thanks. Actually I get what you mean. But i have a problem. I can't find many windowskins for XP. I found a brilliant one for VX but this is the only one from XP. If you know any place I can get windowskins from, please tell me
  12. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    More screenshots. Here's the status bar, I've made half the changes I want here. Though I am likely to change the windowskin again http://i844.photobucket.com/albums/ab3/theonebestperson/REalStatus.png
  13. Lols, I know it's based on Red Riding hood but the concept of using it in an RPG is still unique, I think xD
  14. It looks awesome, especially the title screen. And the maps look interesting. Plus, the story is unique. I can't wait to play this whenever you release it
  15. Is Sera evil? By evil, I mean did she betray Sirius?
  16. theone

    Dawn of Hope

    Gibratania- It's a huge city with many many shops. This section of the city is the area where the poor reside This is the entrance to a little forest grove outside Dattie's hometown. I know this one is empty but it's meant to be this time around since this is a small forest
  17. Quote: Just like every other unpopular group, most of what you find online about Jehovah's Witnesses will be written by people who aren't Jehovah's Witnesses and have something against them, or think they know what they're about but really don't. Not really going to give you an unbiased view, are they? What shaz said. It's a stupid idea to research any religion on the net without reading it yourself first. For example, I can refute all of what is written on many Muslim-hate sites. Christians can do the same. So can Jews. However, if you haven't read their scripture before reading these sites, you'll just say, "It's false."
  18. That quote isn't real, right? LOLS
  19. I believe some parts of what David Icke says, definitely NOT the reptilian part or that there's an elite that wants to kill me. The only part I do believe is that the American Government took full advantage of that attack and are still taking advantage of it. Oh and that this story on Iran is false so they'll attack. I don't get it though. What gives US the right to dictate who has and who has not got Nuclear weapons?
  20. I was waiting for that, in fact, I'm glad you brought up one thing I wanted to notice and another that I didn't know and will improve. As for Rachael you find her character, appearance soon Chapter four: The Capital Mary was walking along with Rachael and Franz when she spotted a few tall buildings in the distance. They had been wandering north towards the capital but neither of them had expected to see the capital so soon. They had been walking quickly after the encounter with the bandits. Shocked but happy, they marched on towards the city gates, oblivious of the danger they would encounter. Mary entered the city and looked around the shops. Never before had she been so glad of being in the marketplace. After all, she hated shopping. But now she was wondering whether she should go shop and buy some clothes. After all the bandits, they had fought had gathered a lot of money. After beating them, they couldn’t just leave the coins around, now could they? Convincing Franz had been easier than she had thought. After all, he was so stuck up about dignity that he would consider it stealing. Mary felt that stealing from thieves was not stealing. With the money they had, they decided to go straight to the inn. But where could the inn be? Splitting up, all three of them decided to ask people where the inn was. They soon got the directions they needed and reached the inn. Mary looked at Franz and saw his sweating face and bulging muscles and for a second was immensely attracted to him but the feeling passed quickly and was in a few seconds was fully banished. Mary questioned herself and her sense for even thinking him as attractive in the first place. It was wrong, he was her cousin. Besides, he was a sexist male chauvinist pig. How could she stoop so low to like him for even a milli-second. Besides he was her cousin. Franz suddenly tapped her shoulder and said, “Why don’t we all explore the city separately?” It was a great idea and they soon agreed. It was more dangerous than they thought. In the Duke’s court, an emergency had been declared and the doors were shut. “What has happened?” asked the duke. His noble manservant replied, “Sire, two people of extraordinary magical ability have entered the city. With them is another mage who is powerful but not at their level but she seems to be the most in control of her mana since it is not leaking everywhere. If we recruit them….” The Duke looked at him and said, “Very well, it shall be done. Capture them if and when they separate but not when they are together. And make sure not to be caught by surprise. Take 10-12 men for this task. Do not fail me.” The nobleman bowed low and said, “It shall be as you have commanded.” Mary wandered around the city, breathing in the fresh smell of spices. This is the life, thought Mary. Then, she saw a man beckoning her to come towards him. Thinking that she could defend herself against anything, she entered the alley and then suddenly, there was darkness.
  21. Please comment on any error you find or any criticism you want to give Chapter 3: The Bandits in the Woods. Mary breathed in the fresh forest air and remembered her camping trips in the small clearing in the city. She chuckled that she had only been gone two hours and was already homesick. The thought cheered her immensely for some unknown reason. Soon though, they were tired and decided to rest. Suddenly, there was a sudden rustling of leaves behind Mary. That noise, it could only be one thing, bandits. They must have circled the area expecting to pillage three teens out on a journey. “Were they going to get the surprise of their life,” thought Mary. Suddenly, a man in leather armor came out of the bushes and raised his sword and said, “Give me your stuff or die.” Mary laughed and then decided to cast her favourite, albeit the only spell she had mastered, she screamed, “Lightening Blast.” The bandit was knocked back, dead. Suddenly, there was a hail of arrows. Mary had not expected archers. She was struck on the arm. Rachael suddenly started crying and held her heart and said, “I wish I could help.” Suddenly, there was light all around her as she started casting a spell. A spell which Mary could tell she had never cast before. She was sure that Rachael had no idea that she had magic before now. After all, why would she hide it? A barrier emerged from Rachael and this separated the bandits and our heroes. Mary looked at Franz and they both nodded and rushed at the bandits. Mary stayed inside the barrier and cast spells at the trees which hid the bandits. Many fell. Franz was an agile swordsman. He ran outside the barrier, dodged the arrows and jumped at the trees and hacked the bandit’s head off. When he had done this to a few people, the rest of them ran off screaming. Mary ran towards Rachael. She knew that using magic for the first time always was painful and affected one’s health adversely. And to use it so long must have been excruciatingly painful for a first time caster. She remembered hearing that healing mages, which must be what Rachael was, used up the most amount of mana and used it up rather quickly. She rushed over and asked Rachael to eat some chocolate. She grudgingly accepted. Other than the slight paleness, she seemed to be all right, but that meant nothing. She could still be in shock or may not be revealing her pain. “You must feel a lot of pain,” Mary said, “at the moment. It will pass soon but you must eat a lot and replenish your energy. That barrier must have taken a lot out of you.” Rachael nodded and they decided to have dinner. Franz went and brought them a dear which was cooked by Mary. Meat haunches were here favourite dish. Eating deer haunches, however, was a new experience but at the end of the meal, Mary could safely say that the meat of a deer would never catch on among the rich.
  22. By art fail, did you mean Gyendal's hand? Other than that, it's pretty nice
  23. I can't believe it. Kids have sex before marriage. That's just not possible. I mean the number of single teen moms were all married but their husbands died before the child was born /sarcasm How can anyone believe that?
  24. Please comment guys Chapter 2: The Journey begins As they wandered around the town, Mary realised that a lot of women were staring at her cousin. She had never noticed it before but then again she’d been trying to escape his company within five minutes of meeting him. Her cousin was tall, handsome and fair, a combination that Mary realised that a lot of ladies died for. Not that she cared. After all, she knew the true personality of her cousin. Any woman he was with had chances of happiness equal to zilch. Even then, she could not help but laugh at anyone who adored her cousin. She wondered how a woman could fall in love with someone’s face instead of their mind. It was ludicrous. It was at times like these that Mary thought that the human race was indeed the dumbest race on the planet. To fall in love this easily and to believe that love to be long lasting had to be the best example of willful self-deception in the entire world. After all, what rational person would agree that one could fall in love, a feeling in itself so undefined that one could not even know whether or not her was in love, at first sight was beyond Mary. With such philosophical thoughts in her minds, she continued towards the gates. As they had never been out of the city, all three of them were unaware of the new toll tax imposed by Duke Justin. The guard ran forward as they were about to leave the city, “One moment, please. There’s this new toll tax …” Franz interrupted the guard and said, “What tax?” The guard sighed and looked at us as if we were ignorant fools and said, “Don’t you know that the war has placed Somerset in a grave economic crisis.” “The War has been extremely cumbersome for the government. Trade was disrupted and a huge amount of expenditure was incurred. These new taxes will help the government gather enough fund to be able to run the county more expeditiously.” Mary, being a lot more clear- sighted than most promptly interrupted with, “So the weight of the debt incurred because of a war started by our leader is to be transferred to the people who never said that there should be a war?” The guard looked appalled by this mode of address and did not reply. Franz, not wanting any trouble, paid the tax and led the group outside towards the forest.
  25. My favourite internet myth would be a very popular one. The one that says Lady Gaga is an evil puppet who works to enslave humanity under an organisation which was created over 300 years ago and was also destroyed around the same time
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