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Ok SO im Making This Rpg For Fun And I Dont Know If its good.Its About A Girl That Dreames Of Learning Magic But No One Belives That Magic Is Real So She Was Very Sad Until One Day SHe Was Beaing Bullied. She Felt A Strange Fealling Then Suddenly She Casted A Force Feild Spell That Protected Her :) Im Still Working On It but I need Some Feedback.

I Got Some Insperation From Avyond :D

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Aww, sounds pretty interesting. Inspiration from Aveyond, hmm?

 

Okay, Helper, first of all, why don't you just capitalize the 1st letter of a sentence instead of trying to capitalize every single word ;) Oh, and most importantly, more accurate spellings and grammar!

 

That'd be great if you could display some screenshots of what you've developed so far? :)

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