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Here's my story.

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"So, Rhen, how are you this morning?" Rhen rolled her eyes. Lorad was sweet talking again. "Master Lorad, I already told you, I'm not helping you to woo out Mistress Ghelda!" But Lorad was really resistant. He begged and pleaded. To a student! "Rhen, you're my only hope! YOU know how I feel about her. And the school Prom is coming up too!" "Prom?! You have Proms here?!" Rhen stared at him. "As a matter of fact, yes. You are going too aren't you? I need you to supervise me! How many times have I saved your neck? You owe me!" Lorad was whining. Rhen looked over her shoulder. Could there be a student lurking behind the door of the empty classroom?

Nope.

"Okay, okay. I'll help you. On one condition." "Name it!" "Hmm two conditions. One: Get me a date too. Two: Don't put me in detention - EVER!" Rhen exclaimed. Lorad groaned. The things you do for a date!

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A DAY BEFORE PROM...

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"Thank you, oh thank you!" Lorad couldn't be more happy. "My deal?" "Yes, yes, here is the boy." Rhen couln't believe her eyes. In front of her stood a green haired boy. Wearing a sorcerer's robe. LARS.

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Lars didn't know what to do. He stood nervously before his big time love. Rhen Darzon, sword singer. "Lorad, you got Lars?!" Rhen was shocked.

"The best I could do. Well, Lars, how about I go and leave you ALONE?"

"I'll get you for this," Rhen muttered.

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PROM NIGHT...

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Rhen looked beautiful.She had let her hair down. Every boy abandoned their date so they could see the lucky one. And there, beside her stood Lars. The 'couple' walked to the dance floor. The song suddenly switched to a romantic, slow song. Lars pulled Rhen really close to him. "Hey!"

But he couldn't resist, The song was perfect for the occasion. He had to tell his feelings.

"Rhen I have something to tell you. I...I...I...L-lo-love....somebody."

"Who is that?"

"She's beautiful and she's got....purple hair."

"ME!?!?!?! You more like hate me!"

"No I don't. I love you."

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Rhen was astonished. Dumbfounded. Lars loved her.

But then....A soft warmth pressed against her lips. There and then, she did not feel anger. Or vicousness. She felt bliss, happiness, love. When they broke apart, four words escaped her lips. "I love you too." And she meant it.

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It's very nice:)

But it's parody... Then Lars can laugh at Rhen and say he

bet with his friends and it's only joke and his truly love is Pirate John :)

i want to write something but i so bad in english :/

But I like your story :) it's so romantic... Mmm:)

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thank you. i know lars is supposed to laugh at rhen but i wanted a twist. like the oracle being evil. thank u soooo much iron maiden! anyway, the inspiration is from different stories, not just one. so thats how it made it a little more interesting. for me atleast. lorad was funny wasnt he?

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Yes, Lorad is very funny :) I never thought he can be so lovely :D I wonder he date with Ghelda or not?

Lars is so cute and romantic... If Dameon see it he will broke his staff and kill yourself ;]

 

PS

My nickname sound stupid, I know :) But I like it, anyway.

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yeah i liked it. its not stupid. it's unique. and a bit weird, but its nice. and yes, in my next story, lorad is gonna date ghelda. and in the next one dameon will join. i am imagining his face....too funny! and my nick is a bit weird too dont you think? well i love sparkly things. A gemstone will be perfect for a name. but ppl say my eyes get misty and im too.......u know wat i mean. head in the clouds. diamond-mist. thats how the name got invented.

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Elini gathered Rhen, Lars, and Pirate John at her tower in Veldt. Over her pink diamond-encrusted intercom, she summoned all of her husbands into the living room.

 

"Don't tell me I have to join them," said Pirate John. "I am NOT singing 'The Sound of Music' to you again, especially in front of these people."

 

Elini gave out a tingly laugh. "No, not this time, dear. Maybe tomorrow. Today, I will tell you the reason why I married all of you."

 

"So we could all clean, cook, and work for you."

 

"So you could all be extras for Veldt's newest smash hit stage show, starring me. Note that everybody, including you, is wearing matching purple sequin outfits, all designed by the famed seer Talia Maurva. My husbands are quite athletic, suited for dancing a long time."

 

"THAT was why you threatened me with a giant Ahriman plushie unless I didn't wear that dumb dress!"

 

2 hours later

 

Pirate John and Elini's other husbands shyly lined up on the rocky stage, constructed with Lars's magic. They linked arms and began doing the can-can. A few minutes later, Elini herself gracefully lifted the curtains, revealing a golden evening gown, and a hearty plate of fruits and vegetables atop her head. She swayed from side to side, a pleasant finale to the Isles' best attraction yet.

 

Even better than the broomstick rides offered by the witches of the swamp, or getting blown out of a giant teapot by talking cats.

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Lars decides to help Rhen with her quest. And Rhen defeats Ahriman. But then Lars turns evil. Before Rhen can use the sword of shadows on Ahriman, he takes all his powers and uses his powers to kill Pirate John and Mad Marge when no one is looking. He then tells everyone that Ahriman killed them. But he has an evil plan. He wants to kill the oracle but before killing her wants to absorb her powers and then rule the world. But he knows he has no hope against her alons. So he devises a plan in which he will take the love potion from Elinis bag and pour it on Elini, Rhen and Teijal and using their powers combined with his, he will kill the oracle and be the supreme ruler of the world

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Rhen and Lars were alone in the Penninsula. Dameon, was going to take a shower, because the party was complaining he was smelling terrible. And along with it, new clothes. His robe was like Michael Jackson's from '80.

 

"So, have you watched pokemon lately?" Lars asked stertching his arms.

 

"No, I was busy with Blood +, now seriously, that girl copied my hairstyle!" groaned Rhen looking at the sky.

 

"Lolz."

 

"Lolz why?! What's so funny?! I tought we, people from Aia, we can't speak so. o_o"

 

"Rhen," Lars said pointing his shoes. "GO CLEAN OFF MY SHOES!"

 

Before he could something else, Rhen kicked Lars's ass to I-don't-know-where.

 

"YOU @#$%^!!!"

 

"GOOD WAIT FOR MEHH!" Lars yelled in the sky opening his arms.

 

(Kinda werid, huh? XD)

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Story Continued

On the way back, Lars asks for Elini's bag because he wants to drink some water. He takes out the love potion and keeps it in his pocket. Lars then decides to torment the oracle by putting the love potion in front of her and killing her. They reach the sunshrine and the oracle comes forward. He then realizes that Ahriman has duplicating powers and now he has so as well. He duplicates the love potion and pours it on Rhen , Elini, Teijal, Daena, Eithera and Talia. They all become admirers and servants of Lars. Lars commands them to kill the oracle. Rhen cast Shadowsong, Elini summons Aesma, Teijal bites the oracle and the druids unleash their full power. The oracle is weakened and Lars takes her powers. He then kills the men and other druids. He orders his slaves to give their powers to him and kill each other. With this power, he destroys the sunshrine and sets out to rule the world

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Continued

First, Lars goes to Veldarah where he takes over Shadwood Academy and creates an army of sorcerors.He then goes to Halloween hills and promises the vampires human blood of Sedona for help. The vampires agree and wipe out the witches. Lastly, he takes over Ghalarah.Lars now has complete control of the Eastern Isles and prepares for an attack on the Western Isles. Hector from Thais decides to betray Lars. But Lars finds out and he follows him to Thais. He goes to Thais alone and uses Absolute Zero to kill the guards. He then uses Annhilate and gets to the time masters. Before impaling the time master, he absorbs his powers and makes the town age. With this done, Thais becomes dead and Lars has to face no problems from them. He also kills Hector before he can warn the isles about the attack. Lars now has a few years to create an army and become the supreme ruler. Little did Lars know that when he consumed Ahriman's and the oracle's power, he came under their control. And now that the oracle and Ahriman were fighting Lar's mind went crazy. He killed himself and Master Lorad took control of the army and prepared to attack.

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Hm.. Quite some update. I wonder if I should continue mine

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Rhen walked out of the library and went straight to her Hentai Group's secret hideout, which is in the storage room right next to the principal's office.

Lars came in a while later with a pile of porn magazines and handed one out to each member.

The model cover of the book was Elini, one of the current top models. For a while, the members were so busy admiring her that they (almost) forget that next to them was the principal's office.

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ZOMG it's OLD THREAD!!!

 

Okay, so this isn't exactly mine... It's sent to me by gamefan. So gamefan, if you don't like me posting this, tell me and I'll get rid of it.

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It all stars when rhen and her group are going to the dreamland to find the dreamers tear.

 

They enter the dreamland

 

Rhen: hey guys why don’t u go left to see if there is anything that we can use to defeat Ahriman and I’ll go right to find agas and the dreamers tear.

 

Dameon: but how do u know that agas is in the dreamland guarding the dreamers tear?

 

Rhen: because your mother Talia said so.

 

Dameon: oh right. I’ll come with u then

 

Rhen: no! I mean no I can do this alone it my prophecy right.

 

Dameon: fine. But don’t die :D

 

Rhen: don’t be stupid Dameon I won’t die I’m stronger than u

 

Dameon: whatever

 

The group sets off to go left and rhen heads right towards agas

 

Rhen gets to the castle that agas is in, he is standing in the middle of the room, rhen runs up to agas and hugs him.

 

Agas: rhen! I have been waiting to see u

 

Rhen: me to

 

Unaware that the rest of rhens group are just about to enter the castle following Dameon. Rhen raps her arms around agas and kisses him.

 

The group enter the castle.

 

Dameon: RHEN!

 

Rhen jumps back in surprise.

 

Rhen: Dameon, why are u here, i told u that i would be fine

 

Dameon: oh yer i can really see that you’re fine

 

Rhen: no it’s not like that, i am fine

 

Dameon: what has he done to u, did he put a spell on u or something, tell me rhen tell me.

 

Rhen: no!

 

Dameon: well im putting one on him

 

*sun fury*

 

Rhen: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

 

Rhen jumps in front of agas and gets hit by dameons sun fury.

 

Rhen fly’s across the room hits the wall and lands on the ground.

 

Everyone runs over to rhen

 

Agas and Dameon both get on one side of rhen and get on the ground next to her. The rest of the group stand behind Dameon.

 

Dameon grabs rhens hand.

 

Dameon: rhen! Rhen! Rhen! Wake up rhen.

 

Agas grabs rhens other hand.

 

Dameon: don’t touch her.

 

Agas: hey i didn’t do this to her it was u that did this.

 

Dameon: yer so but i can heal her.

 

Dameon heals her. But it doesn’t work.

 

Dameon: why is this not working, i can heal everyone else but rhen?

 

Agas: because can’t heal someone that u love without a great sacrifice

 

Dameon: that can’t be right. Let me try again

 

Dameon tries to heal her again but it doesn’t work

 

Agas: move over shortie, let me try

 

Agas tries to heal rhen

 

Elini: i think its working

 

Rhen wakes up

 

Dameon: what how can u heal her but i can’t

 

Agas: because i made a great sacrifice

 

Dameon: oh yer like what i don’t see any thing important disappearing

 

Agas: i gave up my life for rhens

 

Rhen: what! No! You can’t! Why?

 

Agas: because i love u and i want u to live

 

Elini: awwwww how cute

 

Everyone look at Elini

 

Elini: what it is cute

 

Rhen: no u can’t die

 

Agas: i have to i....

 

Agas falls over backwards

 

Rhen: no! No! No! Noooooooooo! You can’t die agas i love u, u cant die

 

Rhen starts crying and puts her head on his chest

 

Dameon: rhen

 

Rhen: no Dameon this i all your fault

 

Dameon: no rhen it’s not my fault

 

Rhen: oh yer then who’s fault is it, just don’t talk to me

 

Dameon: but rhen

 

Rhen: no Dameon just leave me alone don’t talk to me

 

Dameon: fine

 

Elini puts her hand on dameons shoulder

 

Elini: you know what u have to do

 

Dameon: yes i do but im not going to

 

Elini: why not?

 

Dameon: because u heard what rhen said to me she wants to be left alone

 

Elini kicks Dameon in the leg

 

Dameon: owwww fine ill do it

 

*revive exortra*

 

Rhen moves her head of agas

 

Agas stands up and rubs his head

 

Agas: owwww what happened to me

 

Rhen stops crying turns around to Dameon

 

Rhen: Dameon thankyou but why, i said all of those things to u

 

Dameon: because it was the right thing to do

 

Rhen: thankyou

 

Dameon smiles at rhen

 

Rhen: AGAS!

 

Rhen jumps on to agas pushing him against the wall and kisses him

 

Dameon: rhen we have to leave now

 

Rhen: no! We can’t leave yet

 

Elini: he’s right rhen we do have to go the priests might get suspicious

 

Rhen: ok then let’s go

 

They all walk back to the middle of the room and say goodbye to agas then they leave. Rhen is at the back of the group with Dameon. Rhen stops walking

 

Dameon: rhen we have to go

 

Rhen: i know but we forgot the dreamers tear

 

Dameon: oh yer, right

 

Rhen: ages

 

Agas: yes rhen

 

Rhen: can we have the dreamers tear

 

Agas: oh yer sure here catch

 

Agas throws the tear at rhen. It lands in her hand

 

Rhen: thanks

 

Agas: Dameon

 

Dameon: what now

 

Rhen: don’t be mean

 

Dameon: fine, yes agas

 

Agas: i know that u will do the right thing in the end

 

Dameon: ohk

 

Rhen: what is that meant to mean Dameon

 

Dameon: don’t worry rhen

 

Rhen and Dameon both leave and catch up with everyone else

 

They all leave the dreamland in silence and go to the mysten far inn for some rest.

 

At the inn:

 

Elini: so rhen when were u going to tell us about u and agas?

 

Rhen: ummm... i don’t know i guess when we had defeated Ahriman

 

Elini: but what about when we would have gone tovget the dreamers tear what were u going to do then, im sure that u wouldn’t kill him

 

Rhen: i was going to do the same thing but u guys were meant to be gone longer so that we could pretend that i had killed him

 

Elini: oh, well sorry for ruining your plans

 

Rhen: that’s ok this way i don’t have to tell u

 

Elini: ok, well u should get some rest you’ve had a long day

 

Rhen: ok, good night everyone

 

Everyone but Dameon: good night rhen

 

Elini hits Dameon on then arm

 

Dameon: owwww, fine, good night rhen

 

Rhen: good night Dameon

 

They all go to sleep

 

A few hours later...

 

Rhen hears the faint voice of agas

 

Agas: rhen, rhen, rhen is that u rhen

 

Rhen: agas, yes it’s me

 

Agas: im sorry rhen i did not know that he was watching me

 

Rhen: what who was watching u?

 

The room is silent, but then rhen hears a loud thump

 

Rhen: agas! Agas! Agas!

 

Elini wakes up and hears rhen yelling for agas in her sleep

 

She wakes rhen up

 

Elini: rhen what’s wrong?

 

Rhen: agas, i think something has happened to him, i herd is voice

 

Elini: but that’s impossible

 

Rhen: no its not, he has the ability to communicate with me in my sleep

 

Elini: ok then what did he say?

 

Rhen: ummm... he said “ im sorry rhen i didn’t know he was watching me” and then i heard a thump and went silent, but i don’t know what he meant

 

Elini: ok, well let’s try to figure out what he meant

 

Rhen: ok

 

Elini: now agas is one of ahrimans daevas who is meant to be evil and working for him right

 

Rhen: yes that is correct

 

Elini: so maybe he didn’t know that Ahriman was watching him when you were there with him and is shocked to see that one of his daevas has betrayed him. And then taken him to his lair and going to do something to im to punish him for betrayal

 

Rhen: you could be right, if that is the case then we have to save him

 

Elini: don’t worry rhen we will

 

They both go back to sleep.

 

A few days later...

 

The team is about to enter the lair with Ahriman in it

 

Rhen: are u ready to do this team?

 

Everyone: yer

 

Rhen: ok then let’s go

 

They enter the room and find Ahriman standing at the back of the room

 

Ahriman: well, well, well if it isn’t agas’s little purple haired girlfriend

 

Rhen: what im not his girlfriend, I killed him to get the dreamers tear

 

Ahriman: oh yer that’s why he is still alive

 

Rhen: u properly brought him back to life

 

Ahriman: oh yer then explain this

 

A large TV comes down from the roof and plays a video of rhen and agas kissing when Dameon brought agas back to life.

 

Rhen: ok so maybe i am but what are u going to do about it

 

Ahriman: ummm i don’t know why don’t u tell me

 

A small section of the wall behind Ahriman turns around. Agas is on that side of the wall with his head down and his arms in chains on the wall

 

Rhen: agas!

 

Agas puts his head up

 

Rhen runs over

 

Agas: no rhen don’t

 

Ahriman throws a fireball at rhen to stop her

 

The fireball hits rhen and makes her fall backwards

 

Dameon catches rhen

 

Rhen: thanks Dameon i know that i can always trust u to be there for me

 

Dameon: yes

 

Ahriman: well u shouldn’t trust him; he has been lying to u this whole time

 

Rhen: what’s that meant to mean Dameon?

 

Dameon: oh nothing

 

Ahriman: come to me sunpreist

 

Rhen: what! U have been working for Ahriman this whole time

 

Dameon looks over at agas

 

Agas looks at Dameon and nods

 

Dameon: no! Ahriman

 

Ahriman: what u can’t say no to me i control u

 

Dameon: not anymore agas has helped me see the light

 

Ahriman: noooooooooo this can’t be

 

Dameon: im afraid it is, prepare to die Ahriman

 

They all go into battle.

 

Rhen and the team win (of course)

 

Rhen uses the sword of shadows on Ahriman. He gets sucked into the sword

 

Dameon frees agas

 

Rhen runs over to him and hugs him

 

Rhen: are u ok

 

Agas: yes he didn’t hurt me that much

 

Rhen: ok good, but is this what u meant in the dream

 

Agas: yes it is rhen, oh and Dameon u did the right thing

 

Dameon: u said that u knew i would

 

Rhen: wait u knew that Dameon was working for Ahriman

 

Agas: well yer

 

Rhen: then why didn’t u tell me

 

Agas: ummm... i don’t know

 

Dameon: i can answer that

 

Rhen: ok then why

 

Dameon: because when he was standing with Ahriman and I came into to talk to Ahriman agas was there but I didn’t trust him so I put a spell on him so he could not talk about that conversation we had.

 

Rhen: ok that would explain it

 

The roof starts to rumbling

 

Elini: ummm... guys I think we better get going this place is going to collapse any minute now.

 

Rhen: ok, everyone lets go back to the sunn temple to deliver the news

 

They all leave and fly back to the sun temple

 

They enter them temple

 

The oracle screams because of agas

 

Rhen: oracle it’s ok agas is good

 

Oracle: are u sure

 

Rhen: yes 110% sure

 

Dameon: rhen and agas have been a couple for a while now

 

Oracle: seriously? How long have u all known this for

 

Dameon: yer serious, about 5 days now

 

Oracle: that’s a bit strange but ok.

 

The team deliver the news of ahrimans death, then they all go back to their home town except for rhen and agas they go to Thais and become queen and king of Thais.

 

And they all live happily ever after except for Dameon who is still upset about rhen choosing agas instead of him.

 

The End.

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Kill me now

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