iPink Report post Posted October 9, 2009 lol. I would be angry if she were not like that. That's what makes her my favorite character. XD I'm excited for that, if it will ever be. You're a really good writer. ^,^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mayflower Report post Posted October 9, 2009 Wow, Blurble! This is simply superb writing! It seems to me like you work with the few words that are given in the game and then work them into a whole new, wide background that somehow seems to be spot on! And I loved Mel's comment about the shoes! It seems she'll have to teach Edward just when not to be a worried prince! Keep going with the stories and please, yes, do write one about Lydia! I think she has sort of the same potential Lars had in AV1 - meaning that she's totally b****y, but could actually be well liked in the forums if someone (hint, hint) wrote a story that explained where her nasty temper comes from. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luthie Report post Posted October 9, 2009 this is great story! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TrueShadow Report post Posted October 10, 2009 Wow...just wow. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ElderAvey Report post Posted October 11, 2009 Oh wonderful! THis is really good! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lonergirl_14 Report post Posted November 13, 2009 Please write more!!! Your story is great... but it kinda lacks something... it makes me think, "what's going to happen to the country in Mel and Edward's reign?" You keep me hanging for a line that will never be written... *cries* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted April 19, 2010 Wow I think I didn;t realize people had commented here. Um. Thanks everyone @Mayflower: Thanks, I really appreciate that since that's a lot of what I'm trying to do. @lonergirl: I have ideas for mel/ed in 3-4 but I need that to come out before I write them so I can figure out how to them in... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sana96 Report post Posted June 15, 2010 ZOMG I didn't notice "The Balcony" Until now *Slaps myself* Any way Yay! I loved the balcony scene I mean the everything! And I loved the fact that she didn't wear any shoes! This is great Blurble! :goodjob: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted June 15, 2010 Thanks. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
summerblue22 Report post Posted July 12, 2010 i like them both you should write more Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted August 29, 2010 Thanks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mariedan11 Report post Posted September 9, 2010 wee, oh.. please update this if you can. :loving: this story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
eanLUViya Report post Posted October 24, 2010 Great story!!! I was never a fan of MelXEdward but you had converted me!!! yey! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted October 24, 2010 really? they're my favorite pairing. I could wax rhapsodic about them for an hour, how they have such amazing chemistry and compatibility and guh. well, I'm glad I converted you =) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mariedan11 Report post Posted October 25, 2010 haha, didn't convert me though from the very start, i was a fan of the pairing Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted October 25, 2010 Funny because I'm not a fan of most of the Aveyond canon pairings... Ed/Mel is the exception (which is why if Amanda ruins them- angst, divorce, death I DON'T CARE- things will burn. a lot) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
princessbinas Report post Posted January 27, 2011 i like the one where mel and rhen talked to each other. it was so funny i gave myself hiccups! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mickychi Report post Posted February 12, 2011 Your story is great I loved the balcony one especially I wonder what Edward means by "My carrying services are offered only at a price" -smirks- Hehehehe........ hmm I wonder were he's taking her -smirks- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted May 18, 2011 ironic that i wrote things will burn if they were ruined.... and then they kinda were. D= Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted December 25, 2011 Thanks =) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
missamor Report post Posted December 28, 2011 It's fantastic i relly like it too Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blurble Report post Posted May 29, 2013 Thanks! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
negar-bendy Report post Posted June 8, 2015 It was wonderful especially the second one! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites