A touch of a winter crisis(Quick remake with RPG Maker Xp)

[adriana 0]

I worked very hard on this this is my best game yet!

it 10 times better than any other of my games though

my game is not great compared to others

Here's the info:

 

 

Story:Areana, a 19 year old girl goes to fight a bit in the forest and open 2 strange doors in the forest but when shes about to enter she goes home and late at night beast come out of the door and magical beast spread everywhere, Areana is the one to slay the beasts

 

 

Characters:There's 4 characters

Areana

Job:Trainee Mage

Age:19

Gender:Female

 

Tery

Job:Trainee Fighter

Age:Unknown

Gender:Female

 

???

Job: Dark Warlock

Age:Unknown

Gender:Male

 

Galet

Job:Magical Beast

Age:At least 500 hundered

Gender:Unknown even if it has a gender

 

 

Sreenshots Edit:Fixed them

http://img513.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimage5.png/

 

 

 

http://img101.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimage6.png/

 

Please comment and I will update the story and post more screenshots often

Note:This has been updated 11/14/09 7:59PM

[nataliedb2k8 0]

You spelt Characters wrong and I can't see the screenshots. Other than that the plot seems interesting I might give it a try when the game is complete.

[elonah 1]

There's something wrong with the screenshots eh?

[adriana 0]

I'll try to fix them just a wrong URL

Edit:I fixed them they should work now

I need a better name for a male warlock any ideas?

[nataliedb2k8 0]

What type of name are you after?

[adriana 0]

Something wicked for a evil guy

 

So far my game is at least 15 mins. Im making

a 30min. demo so the first part is half way done

im using rpg maker XP

I worked on it for 9 months I had to remake this

I lost the game 3 times becuse I deleted it :Ambulance:

[nataliedb2k8 0]

Lucifer?

[mila26 0]

no that sound so cliche

hmmm.....

[adriana 0]

These are the places I've finished:Red River Town

Red River Town Forest, Ice Cave, Kennel Town

 

edit:If you heard I've changed almost everything in the game and names of places too, I've finished these places:Galered Village, Mist forest

[mila26 0]

here are some names:

Deumus

Balam

Barbatos

Beleth

Berith

Dagwanoenyent

[adriana 0]

Thanks for the large amount of names,it was kinda hard to come up with anything :laughing:

[adriana 0]

http://img137.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimagex.png/

New image for my game, Its the Red River Town's Cursed Temple

 

 

I changed the game and ANY screenshots this post and before you will Never see in the game.

[adriana 0]

Main charater sprite got changed here it ishttp://img413.imageshack.us/img413/4148/schoolmod055vn.png[/img]

 

I changed maps and charater names

 

 

edit:New screenshots for the REAL GAME are finished I have a picture for ever place I've finished and this time I added the name of the place on the picture

Picture 1:http://img197.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimagetr.png/

Picture 2:http://img514.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimage5h.png/

Picture 3:http://img198.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimage6mn.png/

Please tell me what you think

[adriana 0]

4th post in a row?Looks like my the only one awake here.

Anyway since the game making started this is what changes I've made!

 

Name changes

Lisa-Areana

???-Tery

???-Sid

 

New characters

Rairea

(Unamed)

 

Maps and screenshots:Check the post above for REAL sceenshots, all maps are 100% changed and really inproved

 

 

Sprites:

EVERY sprite has changed in post above the new Areana sprite and I'll post others later

 

 

 

That is all I think has changed:)

[adriana 0]

Well I am still working daily and now please tell me witch tile screen looks better and to be used in my game, here they are http://img696.imageshack.us/i/16071284.png/

 

 

http://img10.imageshack.us/i/80342112.png/

 

any questions or some kind of "improvement" to add just PM me

[nataliedb2k8 0]

I prefer the first one. The second one's a bit too plain.

[adriana 0]

New screenshots on a new place in my game:Elemantal cave, (I need to remove the rain on the screen)http://img695.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimage2s.png/

 

http://img163.imageshack.us/i/newbitmapimagei.png/

 

Script:I've have 2 sripts, One shows reflection in a mirror and one makes all party members follow you

 

 

Places finished:as a add on Barenwater Mountain

Elemental Cave, im working:Reri town and Barenwater Town

[adriana 0]

This is remade with RPG Maker XP turned out pretty good it like 1/5 is done in 1 month.Im like up at 12:30PM working, I need to be someplace at 6:00AM! :sleep: Updates soon!

 

Edit:Rpg Maker XP, not the 2003 one!

[adriana 0]

FINALY a update, I got that face script so there will be faces as soon as I update the game up, I'll try to show a face in a message too :love:

 

Screenshot 1

Screenshot 2

Screenshot 2 has the face sript.

[Jeremy 0]

Wow!!! what a good game even the screen shots were worth $$$ i am making a game too but it's not that good I have only worked on 7 maps but hey what can I say i am 10

 

 

P.S GOOD WINDOW SKIN

[Candide 0]

Uhh.. You have a lot of empty space in your maps. You should add some stuff you'd normally see on the ground to make it look more natural; brown patches, flowers, weeds, anything to not make it look so empty.

 

Im so glad you did not forget like last time when we walked trough Reis Cave and

 

You need to fix on punctuation and spelling. Maybe sentence structure too, to make the sentence less awkward.

[adriana 0]

I really need to update my story, It keeps changing

 

Anyway if anybody wondering, Heres the my resoures and stuff SO FAR:

 

Game created by:Adriana (aveyond.com member)

But some help with some resources from the below

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Extra stuff-lets give thanks to the following for...

 

 

1 charset and game tile by

http://www.rpgrevolution.com

 

Areana charset from

http://rmrk.net/index.php?topic=1019.0 created by rmrk.com member:GilgameshRO

 

All other charsets and non-rpg maker chipsets and window skin from

http://www.untamed.wild-refuge.net/rpgxp.php

 

...and of course, help from rpg maker XP resources and VX icons!

 

I created this myself, besides resources I put every bit of it together piece by piece.

 

 

Beta testers:Not chosen

 

 

Bugs Found By Beta Testers:Has no beta testing

what so ever yet.

 

I am not a good speller and I'll work on text too.

 

The start of the game is you head to the woods to hunt with Tery (Why I did't show her talking is because she has I iron-hot bad faceset, I need to fix that!)

[Kbljkl 0]

good start!! I don't think you are going to update it.

 

If you need help with text then i can help.I hope you will update this page soon.

[SarahBera 0]

I was just wondering but, what program or site did you use to create the sprite?.

[ElderAvey 3]

=) looks like fun! keep up the great work!